| Another big problem with pronouns is introducing
them at some distance from their noun. That sets the pronoun adrift.
It is solved by repeating the noun that the distant pronoun stands
for. |
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Another big problem with pronouns is introducing
them at some distance from their noun. That sets the pronoun adrift.
The problem is solved by repeating the noun that the distant pronoun
stands for. |
| Many of the world's indigenous people take
a view of nature that differs strikingly from conventional attitudes.
They are estimated to number more than 250 million. |
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Many of the world's indigenous people-estimated
to number more than 250 million-take a view of nature that differs
strikingly from conventional attitudes. |
